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2020-10-30

       独立写作题目


  “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  Teachers should assign homework that students must do every day.”

  写作范文

  Introduction

  略

  Body

  (以主体部分的一个段落为例,演示论证过程)


  中心句的写作技法:留出信息空白(leave blanks): This frequency is too high and thereby exhausting and counterproductive. 接下来解释为什么 too high和exhausting:It is obvious that a student who has to do homework Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and all the way through Sunday does not have even one day off and feels exhausted. As a result, exhaustion leads to poor learning effectiveness. ← 措辞点:名词化有“逼格”的表达方式 // 描述性的创造“画面感”的表达方式 →when the student is tired, he or she is barely learning anything. 用短句套话引导后面的内容:A further consequence is worse. Many cases indicate that the student is highly likely to develop a strong aversion to study because his or her mind may be overloaded and stuck. 如果统一于前一句的风格,应该是第二种表达方式。As a matter of fact, the proposed arrangement is tiresome for not only students but also teachers. It takes plenty of intellectual work to give proper assignments, and the daily basis is not easy. Meanwhile, marking those assignments is also a heavy load of work.

  Conclusion


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